The reason why I believe that my Valentines Day was delightful was because my beloved one took me to the beach on that very special day. Since he knows that I love going to the beach, it’s the one place were I could let my feeling out, a place were the noise of the ocean turns in lullaby to my ears and puts me asleep. He knew that I would really enjoy it. The ocean and I have history for that very reason we had a beautiful lunch and then later on we went off to a cruise.
Spending one whole day with the person that you love makes you realize many things that probably you haven’t been able to notice. For example one thing that I notice from my beloved one was that he asks me several questions before valentines to come to the conclusion of what were going to do for the evening of Valentines. Which its pretty sweet and romantic at the same time because you never actually expect them to do something that you mention in their own very way.
We went to San Pedro to just eat sea food, but we had planned that after we ate we were going to go watch a movie, but it never happened that way. Since he knows that I love the ocean he bought tickets for a cruise which was one my greatest experiences. Just by been by side looking at the waves coming our way, getting wet, and looking at the sunset the mood and reminded me of the true meaning of what valentines really meant. When we went off to the cruise I wasn’t expecting to see whales, sea lions and even dolphins swimming close to the boat. A day were love,companion,and loyalty is shown.
In conclusion the whole purpose of Valentines day is to spend it with their beloved ones. Like what my beloved one did for me in a very special important way for me. I love what he did for me it proved a lot to me and I love him for that his done for me. The one thing that meant a lot to me was when he whispered in my ear and said the whole ocean is yours and he loves your presence hear as you could see and hear the breeze.
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Awwwwww thats so nice of him. Im glad you had a wonderful Valentines Day. I really enjoyed your story because I love knowing what other people did on their Valentines Day. You Had a few mistakes int he way you used some words. But other than that you did a very good job. You kept me interested and I didnt want to stop treading until I got to the bottom of it. I look fwd on reading more of your interesting stories.
ReplyDeleteHow sweet!
ReplyDeleteWell other than her feelings being observe by this writing piece the main point is shown throughout the whole essay. She mentioned why and how it was a delightful day. Although her point was a very strong point and it came across I would suggest to pay more attention to her sentence structure. Some of her sentences don't go together and others have the wrong tense in them. But other than that It was a strong writing because it was written with passion!
I really enjoyed reading this because it shows how much you and your boyfriend love each other.But there are some grammer errors and need to work on sentence structure but overall there was a lot of details
ReplyDeleteThis essay needs to be re-read by the writer because she has grammatical errors as well as spellling. She is very descriptive and tells the reader her feelings. As I read I found she really had a good time with her boyfriend and he was able to please her with what she wanted for that special day.
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